Well we've talked about this a bit in class so you already know I think it looks stunning. I really enjoy your color palette, I really enjoy that you can tell things will be moving and it will be exciting already, and I enjoy your focus for this narration (ice skating). I think that the individual boxes moving over and around the photos makes sense because it's gliding like an ice skater would glide. My only criticism would be to be careful of that pink color for the type as it could get hard to read.
Well we've talked about this a bit in class so you already know I think it looks stunning. I really enjoy your color palette, I really enjoy that you can tell things will be moving and it will be exciting already, and I enjoy your focus for this narration (ice skating). I think that the individual boxes moving over and around the photos makes sense because it's gliding like an ice skater would glide. My only criticism would be to be careful of that pink color for the type as it could get hard to read.
ReplyDeleteCan't wait to see it!